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[knarf at cct.lsu.edu]

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 \subsection{Academic and Social}
 
 A primary concern for research groups is securing reliable funding
-to support graduate students and postdoctoral researchers. This goal
-is easier to achieve if it can be shown that science goals can be
+to support graduate students and postdoctoral researchers. This
+is easier to achieve if it can be shown that scientific goals can be
 attacked directly with fewer potential infrastructure problems, one
 of the goals of the Einstein Toolkit.
 
-While the Einstein Toolkit does have a large group of users, many of them
-are not directly collaborating on science problems, and some can even be
-seen as competitors. However, all groups agree that sharing the development
+While the Einstein Toolkit does have a large group of users, many of themdo not directly collaborate on science problems, and some compete.
+However, all groups agree that sharing the development
 of the underlying infrastructure is mutually beneficial for every group and the wider community as well.
- This is achieved by lifting much of the
-otherwise necessary burden of creating such an infrastructure off the
-research groups' shoulders, while at the same time increasing the amount
-of code review, and by doing so, code quality.
+This is achieved by lifting  off the research groups' shoulders much of the
+otherwise necessary burden of creating such an infrastructure, while at the same
+time increasing the amount of code review and thus, code quality.
 
 In addition, the Einstein Toolkit provides computer scientists an
 ideal platform to perform state-of-the-art research, which directly
 benefits research in other areas of science and provides an
 immediate application of their research. One of the most prominent
 examples within the Einstein Toolkit is the {\tt Cactus} computational toolkit,
-a framework developed by computer scientists and now used by researchers
-is many other fields.
+a framework developed by computer scientists now used by researchers
+in many other fields.
 
 \section{Design and Strategy}