[Commits] [svn:einsteintoolkit] Paper_EinsteinToolkit_2010/ (Rev. 202)

[knarf at cct.lsu.edu]

User: knarf
Date: 2011/11/14 12:48 AM

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--- ET.tex	2011-11-14 06:41:20 UTC (rev 201)
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@@ -439,8 +439,8 @@
 domain is dynamically adapted to the current state of the simulation,
 i.e., regions that require a higher resolution are covered with blocks
 with a finer grid (typically by a factor of two); these are called 
-\emph{refined levels}. Finer grids can be also recursively refined
-again. At regular intervals, the resolution requirements in the
+\emph{refined levels}. Finer grids can be also recursively refined.
+At regular intervals, the resolution requirements in the
 simulation are re-evaluated, and the grid hierarchy is updated; this
 step is called \emph{regridding}.
 
@@ -459,7 +459,7 @@
 are applied automatically as specified in the execution schedule,
 i.e.\ without requiring function calls in user code.
 Figure~\ref{fig:carpet-details} describes some details of the
-Berger-Oliger time stepping algorithm. More details are described in
+Berger-Oliger time stepping algorithm; more details are described in
 \cite{Schnetter:2003rb}.
 
 \begin{figure}
@@ -489,7 +489,7 @@
     equations on a mesh refinement grid structure with nine levels.
     This shows the time required per grid point,
     where smaller numbers are
-    better, and ideal scaling would be a horizontal line. This
+    better (the ideal scaling is a horizontal line). This
     demonstrates excellect scalability to up to more than 10,000
     cores. Including hydrodynamics approximately doubles
     calculation times without negatively influencing scalability.}
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@
 
 We estimate that,
 in 2010, about 7,000 core years of computing time (45 million core
-hours) were used via {\tt Carpet} by more than a dozen research groups
+hours) will have been used via {\tt Carpet} by more than a dozen research groups
 world-wide. To date, more than 90 peer-reviewed publications and more
 than 15 student theses have been based on {\tt Carpet}~\cite{CarpetCode:web}.