[Commits] [svn:einsteintoolkit] Paper_EinsteinToolkit_2010/ (Rev. 204)

[knarf at cct.lsu.edu]

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Date: 2011/11/14 12:56 AM

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--- ET.tex	2011-11-14 06:53:27 UTC (rev 203)
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@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@
 including expanded tensorial expressions, numerical methods, and the
 large amount of ``glue'' code needed for interfacing a modern HPC
 application with the underlying framework.  Kranc absorbs this
-complexity and allows a scientist to concentrate on writing only the
+complexity, allowing the scientist to concentrate on writing only the
 Kranc script which describes the continuum equations.
 
 This approach brings with it many advantages.  With these complicated
@@ -598,8 +598,8 @@
 sets of variables or formulations of the equations, or they could
 represent completely different physical systems.  The use of a
 symbolic algebra package, Mathematica, enables high-level
-optimizations to be implemented in Kranc which are not performed by
-the compiler.
+optimizations which are not performed by
+the compiler to be implemented in Kranc.
 
 Any enhancements to Kranc can be automatically applied to all codes
 which are generated using Kranc.  Existing codes have easily benefited
@@ -608,7 +608,7 @@
 efficient use of modern multi-core processors; (ii) support for
 multipatch domains with the Llama~\cite{Pollney:2009yz} code; (iii) automatic generation of
 vectorized code, where the equations are evaluated simultaneously by
-the processor for two grid points at the same time, and (iv) common
+the processor for two grid points at the same time; and (iv) common
 sub-expression elimination, and various other optimization strategies.
 
 Within the Einstein Toolkit, the Einstein evolution thorn McLachlan,