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 of the goals of the Einstein Toolkit.
 
 While the Einstein Toolkit does have a large group of users, many of them do not directly collaborate on science problems, and some compete.
-However, all groups agree that sharing the development
+However, many groups agree that sharing the development
 of the underlying infrastructure is mutually beneficial for every group and the wider community as well.
 This is achieved by lifting  off the research groups' shoulders much of the
 otherwise necessary burden of creating such an infrastructure, while at the same
 time increasing the amount of code review and thus, code quality.
-
 In addition, the Einstein Toolkit provides computer scientists an
 ideal platform to perform state-of-the-art research, which directly
 benefits research in other areas of science and provides an
-immediate application of their research. One of the most prominent
-examples within the Einstein Toolkit is the {\tt Cactus} computational toolkit,
-a framework developed by computer scientists now used by researchers
-in many other fields.
+immediate application of their research.
 
 \section{Design and Strategy}